Hey, your photography is magnificent, so picking a choice on this poll was kind of difficult. Wound up choosing "Portraits & Animals," despite the fact that your portraits actually don't look like they need any more work. The only thing that looks like it could benefit from any more focus is the animal thing-- understandable, since animals in their natural environment are hardly the most accommodating models (), so they tend to make framing a little difficult.
"Fenced In" worked really well. Maybe try working some more with that sort of thing?
ok joking. but i would think of finding better spots to take pics from. to make less unnecessary details but try keep only related to main idea. Hey, this one is best example - [link] - it's solid and clear. dunno. what else. i guess u have composition ideas it's up to u.
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I'm no expert, well, apart from knowing what I like and what I don't like Personally, (based on your most recent work) I think you need to focus on surroundings, how relaxed/comfortable your model is, the lighting (it seems like there is too much light on your model to make any sort of effect on the whole ambience of your shot), what sort of emotion you are trying to portray - it's not just a point of getting some girl to lean against a wall and you snapping away - you need to build a rapport and create an atmosphere and a story.
I don't do "people shots", cuz I know it is really hard work. I hope my comments have been of some use - like I said, I'm no expert, but I can look at a shot and say whether or not I like it...
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"Fenced In" worked really well. Maybe try working some more with that sort of thing?
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...and then wash your mouth out with soap.
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What do I need to improve most?
|Violence is the failure of minds to generate a better solution|
~Paraphrasing Bruxy Cavey.
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...and then wash your mouth out with soap.
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my site [link]
Visit my gallery on DA - it's WORTHY! - [link]
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What do I need to improve most?
|Violence is the failure of minds to generate a better solution|
~Paraphrasing Bruxy Cavey.
switch-mode should improve switch mode
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my site [link]
Visit my gallery on DA - it's WORTHY! - [link]
but i would think of finding better spots to take pics from. to make less unnecessary details but try keep only related to main idea.
Hey, this one is best example - [link] - it's solid and clear.
dunno. what else. i guess u have composition ideas it's up to u.
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my site [link]
Visit my gallery on DA - it's WORTHY! - [link]
Personally, (based on your most recent work) I think you need to focus on surroundings, how relaxed/comfortable your model is, the lighting (it seems like there is too much light on your model to make any sort of effect on the whole ambience of your shot), what sort of emotion you are trying to portray - it's not just a point of getting some girl to lean against a wall and you snapping away - you need to build a rapport and create an atmosphere and a story.
I don't do "people shots", cuz I know it is really hard work. I hope my comments have been of some use - like I said, I'm no expert, but I can look at a shot and say whether or not I like it...
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If I had anything intelligent to say, I wouldn't be using emotes now, would I?
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What do I need to improve most?
|Violence is the failure of minds to generate a better solution|
~Paraphrasing Bruxy Cavey.
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